tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post3850003260705891236..comments2013-04-14T21:45:26.933-07:00Comments on A Martin's Life: Lord of the Flies Found Poem-UtopiaAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02036186294455835471noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-55326296614128650722013-04-14T21:45:26.933-07:002013-04-14T21:45:26.933-07:00ok, now without that dramatic reading narrated in ...ok, now without that dramatic reading narrated in the video I don't think I would have read it the same way from the formatting in the written version.<br />So, I find that quite interesting. <br />feedback for the future poem: arrange the poem on paper as you would have your audience read it. Don't centre justify every line. where are the list of contributors to the group found poem? that should be in the post and/or video somewhere (first names or initials ok)<br />I liked how the video was put together. Good clarity of narration; dramatic reading and very creative and original visuals. Way to go!<br />Ms. K.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10922365560133640641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-49971967085231821222013-04-11T20:40:46.013-07:002013-04-11T20:40:46.013-07:00I loved how the tone of the poem escalates, specif...I loved how the tone of the poem escalates, specifically how that if you press the button "9" at any times during the video, you can hear the clear contrast. Also, I liked the ongoing, consistent use of colours to describe the imagery of the poem. They really helped paint an image in my mind. Awesomely done. <br /><br />- Vincent T.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07766212027846635242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-66036267735710261842013-04-08T23:50:17.645-07:002013-04-08T23:50:17.645-07:00I like how you made it sound so dramatic. Amazing ...I like how you made it sound so dramatic. Amazing job :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-32712806604890107852013-04-07T20:33:00.402-07:002013-04-07T20:33:00.402-07:00Very well organized poem and great images. I reall...Very well organized poem and great images. I really like the expression in the voice over.Daniel Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16987549220871356826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-43261886681688668662013-04-07T15:12:54.368-07:002013-04-07T15:12:54.368-07:00Lol sry no >.< unfortunately this isnt fbLol sry no >.< unfortunately this isnt fbAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02036186294455835471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-47531762585925335822013-04-07T15:12:18.793-07:002013-04-07T15:12:18.793-07:00Thats called sarcasm :DThats called sarcasm :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02036186294455835471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-52090633322008582922013-04-07T14:27:41.300-07:002013-04-07T14:27:41.300-07:00-Henry-HenryHenry Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11660751465119554352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-68429532985379582542013-04-07T14:21:39.610-07:002013-04-07T14:21:39.610-07:00I loved the pictures and voice over. Also, I found...I loved the pictures and voice over. Also, I found the poem's name quite interesting. Even though the island was far more like distopia, you named it utopia... I wonder why :PHenry Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11660751465119554352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-30601204673536450052013-04-07T13:14:15.125-07:002013-04-07T13:14:15.125-07:00-Darren (I can't edit comments..?)-Darren (I can't edit comments..?)<br />Darrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13517907202050767871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-52490545547703748102013-04-07T13:13:30.580-07:002013-04-07T13:13:30.580-07:00Nice video! The poem was even better with your gre...Nice video! The poem was even better with your great intonation. Also, the drawings well illustrates the setting and the atmosphere too! As someone mentioned it above too, I like the beach drawing. :DDarrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13517907202050767871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-60698347158547598402013-04-06T20:57:02.954-07:002013-04-06T20:57:02.954-07:00I really like the intonation of your voice. It rea...I really like the intonation of your voice. It really helps the viewer to understand the meaning. The drawing just completes it in the best way. Great work!Hana https://www.blogger.com/profile/15270410674346695250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-1711572634995309152013-04-06T20:49:56.952-07:002013-04-06T20:49:56.952-07:00I really like your drawings, especially the first ...I really like your drawings, especially the first one of the beach. The drawings really add to the atmosphere of your well written poem.<br />-SallySallywhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16430388827646547398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-52810597860225203512013-04-06T20:06:53.315-07:002013-04-06T20:06:53.315-07:00really liked the poem you guys created. Also the i...really liked the poem you guys created. Also the intonation the poem was said in, it in was very clear and easy to understand. Well donelaura210315https://www.blogger.com/profile/09486676750510424050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-67395140079216854562013-04-06T18:18:23.017-07:002013-04-06T18:18:23.017-07:00Great poem, I really liked your video. The voice h...Great poem, I really liked your video. The voice had strong emotions, especially in the darker parts of the poem. Also the visual interpretations of the poem really enhanced it's significance. <br /><br />-MasonThe Rat Packhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12192711336627841036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9146944963142752130.post-16417468090547800092013-04-06T01:30:59.640-07:002013-04-06T01:30:59.640-07:00I must admit that this is an outstanding video wit...I must admit that this is an outstanding video with vivid and precise drawings, and a well-organized found poem. I love your unique way of presenting this found poem. Your voice and tone are especially impressive!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00635714675178812929noreply@blogger.com